Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Overview Page

This blog is available to anyone interested in writing Public discourse. Three main sections will guide you through writing tips, editing tips, and applications of the outlined material.

In "Writing Know How" you'll find:


Telling your readers where and what to think

Interested in writing a scientific piece? Check out this link to learn about stases patterns in scientific discourse.


Using proper citations

This section helps with citations!


This section helps you form credible arguments!

In the "Editing"section you'll find guides to editing different public genres


Scientific discourse deals with tons of statistics and information. Check this out for some guidelines!


When editing one should take ethics and clarity into consideration to avoid any biases.

Editing Wikipedia

Editing Wikipedia 2.0

If you, much like myself, are a Wikipedia author you should check out these posts for examples and rules to Wiki-editing.

The: "Applications" section gives you some examples of public discourse


Reforming Education with Technology

A post on a suggested education reform for the state of Florida


Where and when to use Wikipedia in Public Discourse is outlined in this post.

I hope you find this blog helpful in all your writing endeavors! 









Thursday, April 25, 2013

Wikipedia Analytic Reflection


          The creation of this Wikipedia article has proven to be more meticulous than I could have ever imagined. As a college student I have been creating scholarly based arguments for quite some time, but the task of transposing content onto a digital platform was something new to me. As intriguing as the open environment of Wikipedia is it yields a sense of anxiety and immediacy as the information published should be the most current and accurate content available. I found that Ridolfo and DeVoss’ piece on “Rhetorical Velocity” to be very helpful in that composing was to be seen as a “strategic approach” rather than the systematic approach of turning in an assignment to a professor.
            “Rhetorical Velocity” made me notice how important the order of content and facts within the content are. I found my information floodgates to be overwhelmed during the writing of the definition sections for medium and mode. I had so much information available! As Wikipedia authors we need to judge what should be included as it is a direct reflection on the assumptions that will be made by the viewers.
            Earlier in the semester I created a “sci-tech” blog where a claim is supported by a scientific study. This was the closest to any sort of experience I had with this style of writing considering I had never written for Wikipedia in the past. I had to take into consideration that the audience of this content was unclear hence could not use jargon or any enthymemes that confused viewers. As a transformer of information I tried making sure that information was clear and unbiased. “Blogging as a Social Action” talks about how “the weblog phenomenon raises a number of rhetorical issues including the intersection of the public and private that weblogs seem to invite.” This helped guide me through the writing process. I knew that my section would be closer to the beginning of the article hence I stayed away from diving too deep into the information. I knew the article would efficiently give users an understanding by the end.

Works Cited
Devoss, Nicole, and Jim Ridolfo. "Composing for Recomposition: Rhetorical Velocity and          
Delivery." (2009): n. page. Web. 7 Mar.        2013.             <http://www.technorhetoric.net/13.2/topoi/ridolfo_devoss/index.html>.

Badger, Meredith. "Visual Blogs." Into the Blogosphere: Rhetoric, Community, and Culture of Weblogs." Ed. Laura J. Gurak, Smiljana Antonijevic, Laurie Johnson, Clancy Ratliff, and Jessica Reyman. June 2004. 10 April 2005 <http://blog.lib.umn.edu/blogosphere/visual_blogs.html>.

Thursday, April 11, 2013

Stepping into Wikipedia Editing


       
 
       Editing in the online space is far different than editing a text. A sense of urgency exists in regards to digitally publishing credible data as its turnover rate is faster than any other medium. This rapid turn over rate is in part due to poor paraphrased writing that presents information in manners that can mislead readers.
            For the first section I edited the Wikipedia page on rhetorical velocity. The page outlined DeVoss and Ridolfo’s definition of rhetorical velocity and was on Wiki’s watch list for more sources. I found a scholarly article written by Douglas Eyman that was cited in DeVoss and Ridolfo. Eyman gave a clear example of the rhetorical velocity of a publication. I felt the wiki article could use a concrete example of the theory in “motion”. In Jones’ “Finding the Good Argument” she talks about two logical strategies: inductive and deductive reasoning. For the sake of the medium, I used deductive logic to go from a broad definition to a narrowed example. Wikipedia is interacted with via a computer/mobile device screen in a linear fashion. In an effort to mimic human reasoning I put the example after the definition.
            For the second portion of the assignment I chose to edit the Ralph Lauren Wikipedia page. The community portal page’s “help out” section categorized this article as needing a stronger lead section. Style states: “a sentence seems clear when its important actions are in verbs (Williams and Colomb).” With this in mind, I restructured some of the already existing information so that the American clothing designer was recognized for involvement in various fields. The sentence places the importance in the verbs. Also, information on his other successful brands was not included in the lead, information that I believe to be important in summarizing Ralph Lauren. I reflected the added information in the lead to a section added to his career summary, which comes later in the article.

Works Cited

Jones, Rebecca. "Finding the Good Argument OR Why Bother With Logic?." Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. 1. n. page. Print.

Williams, Joseph, and Gregory Colomb. Style: The Basics of Clarity and Grace. 4. Pearson, Print.

Monday, April 1, 2013

Wikipedia: The Pioneer of a Public Global Discourse


            
          When using other people’s research in creating our own arguments it is important to keep ethics and fallibility in mind. Wikipedia, a medium that was once characterized as unreliable, is growing into an intellectual melting pot for scholars and enthusiasts alike. Winterowd, Hood, and Gates give insight to possible issues in creating discourse that is unclear, fallible, and offensive (ethically).
            Winterowd extrapolates how a statements structure can lead to a lack of clarity. In the public context it is imperative to have a concrete intention for writing. Winterowd states that we must know whether we are promising or stating. The mechanics behind these situations lie in propositions. Propositions can be categorized into two categories: Performative and non performative.
A performative sentence looks like this:
I (hereby) advise you to only use credible sources in Wikipedia articles.
While a nonperformative sentence looks like this:
You use credible sources in Wikipedia articles.
            Winterowd states that we gain some clarification of the nature of performatives by the fact that they can easily take the modification of the adverb hereby. As future Wikipedia authors it useful to create performative propositions (ones where hereby can be easily added) as they are concrete and leave no room for misinterpretation. Winterowd also calls attention to the creation of ambiguity via the stating of sentences in question as the object of a performative verb.
            Hood is a professor who encountered a fallible Wikipedia entry on thermodynamics. Wood edited the “offensive fragment” and followed the procedure for replacing vandalized text outlined in “Wikipedia: Vandalism.” Surprisingly, this collegiate English professor is a supporter of Wikipedia. She understands that Wikipedia provides the opportunity to write for an audience that LITERALLY responds. As knowledge seeking individuals it is important to see fallible information as an opportunity to move discourse forward. We need to understand the consequences of the way we compile the content of entries if we are going to be creating Wikipedia entries.
            The global community that Wikipedia creates is unique and is intended towards being a medium for the most current and relevant information on topics. Hood encourages her students to look into Wikipedia as it offers information created by a diverse set of authors. She points out that students currently have a less predictable understanding of audience due to their high use of digital and virtual environments. This being said, the authors of a single Wikipedia article can come from 3 different continents. It’s exciting to think that an American student can simultaneously be working on the same entry as an Asian student 6 time zones away. If done correctly Wikipedia offers an international platform for the growth of knowledge. Wiki authors should look into Wikipedia’s citation tips and keep in mind that a reference that has already been published is deemed as more credible than an unpublished account.
            Logically, Gates is covered last in this post, as he seems to sum up the ideas of ethics and fallibility in the public expression of complex topics. Gates is a strong believer in the humanities. The Internet has catapulted global communication in such a significant way that we need to learn to embrace its uses. Gates states:
We need to reform our entire notion of core curricula to account for the comparable eloquence of the African, the Asian, the Latin American, and the Middle Eastern traditions, to prepare our students for their roles in the twenty-first century as citizens of a world culture, educated through a truly human notion of the humanities.
            As a student I find it overwhelming to think that I am in fact participating in a global community when editing Wikipedia entries. Gates’ suggestion is that universities require students to take humanistic course in efforts of expanding boundaries of social tolerance. It is human nature to be less likely to be open to unfamiliar things. Mandating students to learn more about other cultures can be useful in avoiding fallibility and creating non-offensive content. The more aware students are of other culture the more direction they have in creating discourse that invites more discourse to be created.
            For example, though not institutionally mandated, I participated in an international program and lived in Spain for 5 months. The perspective I gained from the experience has affected my work ethic and consideration for other cultures in my arguments. I visited an Islamic country where women still face suppression and lived in a country where quality of life came before productivity.
            It is naïve to assume that Wikipedia authors come from a homogenous group. As the population of educated individuals is exponentially diversifying the content will also become more diverse. This is an amazing opportunity to gain knowledge through perspective; the best part of all is that it can all be done in the comfort of your own home or office.